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Post by Saberclaw on Sept 9, 2006 11:25:32 GMT -5
Prolouge
The full moon shined down on the victorious ThunderClan. ThunderClan just won Shining Rocks from RiverClan. A blue she-cat walked toward a beautiful tortiseshell she-cat. "We did it Spottedleaf, we've one!" The blue cat meowed. "Yes we have Bluestar! I'm very proud of our clan!" Spottedleaf meowed. "What are you ladies talking about?" A big dark brown tabby meowed. "Tigerclaw, we were talking about our victory." Bluestar meowed. "Yes, we showed those RiverClan wimps whose boss!" Tigerclaw meowed. "Tigerclaw, there you are! Would you help me gather all the injured cats to Spottedleaf's den?" A tortiseshell tom with a fox red busy tail meowed. "Of course Redtail! I'm on my way!" Tigerclaw meowed. "Gotta go dearies!" Tigerclaw meowed to Bluestar and Spottedleaf. Tigerstar followed Redtail. Just then, Spottedleaf just saw a shooting star. "Bluestar! I've recieved a message from StarClan!" Spottedleaf meowed. "Really? What did they say?" Bluestar asked. "They've said 'Fire alone can save our clan.'" Spottedleaf meowed. "But Fire is feared by all clans! We've won! We have no need to be saved!" Bluestar gasped. "That's what they've said Bluestar." Spottedleaf meowed. "Well, you've never been wrong before Spottedleaf. Fire alone will save our clan." Bluestar meowed.
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Post by wolfclaw on Sept 9, 2006 11:45:50 GMT -5
umm...."dearies"? that is really random....
PS: not to upset any of the Tigerstar fans, but can you give Tigerclaw a bloody nose?
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Post by Saberclaw on Sept 9, 2006 12:02:49 GMT -5
Okay, here are the spoilers. Tigerclaw, Darkstripe, and Brokentail will be good cats. Raggedstar is leader of ShadowClan and Brokentail is his deputy. Yellowfang is still ShadowClan's medicine cat and Cinderpelt is her assistant. Yes Cinderpelt is ShadowClan's other medicine cat. ShadowClan and ThunderClan are friends. Bone will be the only bad cat in this story. Scourge will join Thunderclan. Rusty and Longtail will battle. Ther will be a love triangle with Sandpaw (she's in love with Rusty and Firepaw and Dustpaw). Rusty wins Sandpaw. Rusty becomes Firepaw in chapter 4. Firepaw brings Cloudkit to ThunderClan. Ravenpaw does not leave ThunderClan. Firepaw and Sandpaw have kits (Squirrelkit and Leafkit) in chapter 9. Chapter 11, Firepaw, Graypaw, Sandpaw, Ravenpaw, Sandpaw, and Dustpaw recieve their warrior names. Ravenpaw's warrior name shall be Ravenfeather. Scourge comes to ThunderClan. Chapter 12, Bone kills Bluestar, taking all of her nine lives at once and he kills the RiverClan deputy Oakheart. Redtail (Redstar) makes Fireheart deputy. Crookedstar is Riverclan's leader and he makes Silverstream his deputy. Chapter 14, Bone kills Redstar. Fireheart will become leader. Whitestorm becomes Firestar's deputy. Chapter 17, Squirrelkit, Cloudkit, and Leafkit recieve their appentice cermonies. Leafpaw becomes Spottedleaf's apprentice. Chapter 18, Fernkit, Ashkit, Bramblekit, Tawnykit, Mothkit, and Hawkkit are born. Chapter 19, Crowpaw becomes Crowfeather (he's a WindClan cat and he's in love with Leafpaw). Chapter 22, the RiverClan cats Stonepaw, Mistypaw, Stormpaw, and Featherpaw recieve their warrior names. Crowfeather does not fall in love with Feathertail. Graystripe and Silverstream are Stormfur's and Feathertail's parents. Silverstream doe not die. Leopardfur is a ThunderClan cat. Chapter 25, Squirrelpaw and Cloudpaw recieve their warrior names and Leafpaw becomes Leafpool. Chapter 26, Fernkit, Ashkit, Bramblekit, Tawnykit, Mothkit, and Hawkkit recieve their apprentice ceromonies. Chapter 28, Bone, leader of BloodClan, brings BloodClan to the forest. The clans battle BloodClan. Bone kills Whitestorm. Firestar kills Bone. BloodClan screams in terror and runs away from the forest. Instead of SunningRocks, it shall be known as ShiningRocks. Squirrelflight becomes Firestar's deputy. Chapter 31, Squirrelflight and Bramblepaw have kits. Yellowfang is in love with Raggedstar and Brokentail is their only surviving kit. Dustpelt and Fernpaw fall in love. Chapter 40, Dustpelt and Fernpaw have kits. Chapter 44, Fernpaw, Ashpaw, Bramblepaw, Tawnypaw, Mothpaw, and Hawkpaw recieve their warrior names. Tawnypelt stays in ThunderClan. Mothwing does not become a medicine cat because she's a warrior. Hawkfrost shall be a good cat as well. Blackfoot is a good cat as well. And the story shall end on chapter 50.
Enjoy writing!
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Post by wolfclaw on Sept 9, 2006 15:22:36 GMT -5
o.O that was a lot
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Post by Saberclaw on Sept 9, 2006 15:59:43 GMT -5
Come on! Help me write it!
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Post by Jayfeather on Sept 9, 2006 16:04:19 GMT -5
Just then a cat named Rusty was having a dream. He was in a forest with tiny mice running in circles just waiting to be pounced on. Then a Tortisceshell she-cat came with a Flooglehorn playing it loudly and scared all the mice away with its horriblie sound. But Rusty was 2 busy drooling over the she-cat 2 notice then he blureted out "I WUV U PRETTY KITTY!!!!" the she-cat stopped playing and ran away
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Post by Saberclaw on Sept 9, 2006 16:12:12 GMT -5
Rusty was in pursuit. Jut then, I giant raven swoop from the sky and snatched up Rusty. Rusty screamed. Rusty woke up. Shocked from beyond belief. Rusty ran out from his pet door and ran into the forest. He ran faster and faster. Just then, a long haired gray cat pounced on him.
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Post by wolfclaw on Sept 9, 2006 16:19:06 GMT -5
...Flooglehorn?
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Post by Saberclaw on Sept 9, 2006 16:30:37 GMT -5
It's a type of horn.
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Post by Jayfeather on Sept 9, 2006 16:31:17 GMT -5
yup
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Post by Saberclaw on Sept 10, 2006 13:49:10 GMT -5
Come on! Write more!
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Post by wolfclaw on Sept 11, 2006 16:10:23 GMT -5
that was really random...
"Hey!" hissed Rusty.
"A kittypet!" screeched the gray tom in alarm. he jumped off of Rusty and raised his hackles, fr bristling. "What are you doing on ThunderClan territory?" ThunderClan? Kittypet? What did these words mean?
"I don't know what you are talking about," Rusty mewed, trying to keep calm. The young gray cat settled down.
"I guess you're no threat then," he mewed. "I'm Graypaw of ThunderClan."
"Graypaw? I'm Rusty. I live at that house over there." Rusty pointed his tail at the house he came from. "Say, did you see a pretty tortoiseshell kitty with a flooglehorn?" Graypaw looked confused, as if all Rusty said was just nonsense.
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Post by Saberclaw on Sept 11, 2006 17:11:18 GMT -5
"She was over there on that rock!" Rusty exclaimed.
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Post by wolfclaw on Sept 13, 2006 16:26:33 GMT -5
"I don't know what you're talking about," mewed Graypaw, shaking his head.
"But I saw her!" Rusty protested. "I really did!" Graypaw purred in amusement.
"You don't seem that bad. Tell you what, I'll fetch Bluestar for you." Graypaw dissapeared into the thicket. Rusty stood there, waiting for this "Bluestar".
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Post by Bautypelt on Sept 19, 2006 14:56:31 GMT -5
Graypaw reappeared with a blue-gray she-cat. "What's your name and what's your buisness?" She spoke.
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