Post by Rain[shine] on May 6, 2007 11:38:13 GMT -5
Ok this is it.I finally finished the first chapter of my story.I'll be posting it in chapters.(As if the title didn't give it away they have wings.Eggs are were kits come from,well from the mother "creating" the egg first.There is a new egg hatching season every two moons)
[Waterclan]
Leader-Solarstar:A light golden she-cat with gold feather wings. (67 moons)
Deputy-Slashpelt:A white tom with black sploches on his fur,White butterfly wings. (45 moons)
Medicine cat-Springfeather:A light tan she-cat with snow white feather wings. (34 moons)
Warriors-
Rapidstep:A dark gray tabby tom with black butterfly wings. (56 moons)
Crimsonsky:Light brown tabby with light gray butterfly wings. (54 moons)
Gorsestreak:Bear brown tom with light brown featherwings. (45 moons)
Apprentices-
Oakpaw:Light brown tom with darker brown feather wings. (14 moons)
Pinepaw:Light almost green brown tom with gray feather wings. (13 moons)
Skypaw-Light gray tabby she-cat with amber eyes and sky bule wings.(10 moons)
Queen(s)-
Snowfrost:White she-cat with blue wings. (56 moons)
Elder(s)-
Driftwoodbelly:All black tom,lost his wings due to Thunderpath crash. (78 moons)
[Sunclan]
Leader-Ruststar:rust colored tom, with brown butterfly wings. (90 moons)
Deputy-Coppertail:Tortishell she-cat with copper colored tail,light brown wings. (45 moons)
Medicine cat-Tigerwhisker:Tiger striped tom with striped wings. ( 67 moons)
Warriors-
Oceanstripe:Gray tabby she-cat with bule wings. (45 moons)
Zebraspot:A black striped tom,with Zebra wings. (56 moons)
Duskfoot: A black tom with fading gray wings. (48 moons)
Apprentices-
Redpaw:A dark brown tom,with red wings. (16 moons)
Honeypaw:A lithe honey colored she-cat with gold butterfly wings. (14 moons)
Queen(s)-Poppystone:A brown,white and gray marbled she-cat,with dark brown wings. (45 moons)
Elder(s)-Smallbrook:A lithe but very small tom,shortened wings. (95 moons)
[Shadeclan]
Leader-Emberstar:Dark amber brown she-cat,with golden feathery wings. (64 moons )
Deputy- Hawkstone: Bright redish orange tom,with hawk's wings.
(53 moons)
Medicine cat-Rainwhisper:A very light gray she-cat with almost white gray wings.( 67 moons)
Warriors-
Flamesky:A black and white tom with white wings. (45 moons)Basilclaw:A tortishell she-cat with hazel eyes,white feather wings. (45 moons)Brazenwind:A dark brown tabby with forst brown wings. ( 34 moons)
Apprentices-
Quietpaw:A mute light gray she-cat,gray wings. (13 moons)
Queens-Sunrose:A golden she-cat with light black wings.
(38 moons)
Elders-
Ripear:A small tabby tom with no ears,Red wings. (89 moons)
EDIT-I will fix the Clans up to show the changes in the chapters
Prologue
A small pool,filled with stars of the sky,but the sky was black.Five cats sat around a such strange pool.What was thought to be a leader,later found to be an elder,stood,his glossy white fur glowly.
"A prophecy has come!"He rasped,his old voice filling the area.A lean and lithe gray tabby she-cat got up,a leader.
"Wiseheart,we all have found out.But thank-you,we all can know now."A hint of annoyence was traced in her voice,as her feather wings fluttered in a small breeze.
"But the clans are weak! Not another tragety!"Yowled a dark gray tom,his black wings stiff.
"Why should it be bad?It might not be Nightheart."Asked another leader, her voice fading.One cat sat on the edge,his eyes staring into the deep star-filled pool.The cat got up,his gray eyes filled of strangeness.The wings of this cat were black,almost as the blank night sky.His words weren't of his own,it was monotone,and the voice echoed.
"There will be one,
With wings of the sky,
Who hold the power,
To change it all."
He wasn't known through the clans,an old elder maybe,but the prophecy was spoken.The cats murmered to eachother about the strange cat,who had spoken of the prochey.The gray tabby she-cat stepped forward.
"It has been spoken."Her voice was loud and clear,every word bounced off the wall of the closed area.The cats one by one was leaving,untill a light golden she-cat was left,crouched over,staring into the starry pool.
[Waterclan]
Leader-Solarstar:A light golden she-cat with gold feather wings. (67 moons)
Deputy-Slashpelt:A white tom with black sploches on his fur,White butterfly wings. (45 moons)
Medicine cat-Springfeather:A light tan she-cat with snow white feather wings. (34 moons)
Warriors-
Rapidstep:A dark gray tabby tom with black butterfly wings. (56 moons)
Crimsonsky:Light brown tabby with light gray butterfly wings. (54 moons)
Gorsestreak:Bear brown tom with light brown featherwings. (45 moons)
Apprentices-
Oakpaw:Light brown tom with darker brown feather wings. (14 moons)
Pinepaw:Light almost green brown tom with gray feather wings. (13 moons)
Skypaw-Light gray tabby she-cat with amber eyes and sky bule wings.(10 moons)
Queen(s)-
Snowfrost:White she-cat with blue wings. (56 moons)
Elder(s)-
Driftwoodbelly:All black tom,lost his wings due to Thunderpath crash. (78 moons)
[Sunclan]
Leader-Ruststar:rust colored tom, with brown butterfly wings. (90 moons)
Deputy-Coppertail:Tortishell she-cat with copper colored tail,light brown wings. (45 moons)
Medicine cat-Tigerwhisker:Tiger striped tom with striped wings. ( 67 moons)
Warriors-
Oceanstripe:Gray tabby she-cat with bule wings. (45 moons)
Zebraspot:A black striped tom,with Zebra wings. (56 moons)
Duskfoot: A black tom with fading gray wings. (48 moons)
Apprentices-
Redpaw:A dark brown tom,with red wings. (16 moons)
Honeypaw:A lithe honey colored she-cat with gold butterfly wings. (14 moons)
Queen(s)-Poppystone:A brown,white and gray marbled she-cat,with dark brown wings. (45 moons)
Elder(s)-Smallbrook:A lithe but very small tom,shortened wings. (95 moons)
[Shadeclan]
Leader-Emberstar:Dark amber brown she-cat,with golden feathery wings. (64 moons )
Deputy- Hawkstone: Bright redish orange tom,with hawk's wings.
(53 moons)
Medicine cat-Rainwhisper:A very light gray she-cat with almost white gray wings.( 67 moons)
Warriors-
Flamesky:A black and white tom with white wings. (45 moons)Basilclaw:A tortishell she-cat with hazel eyes,white feather wings. (45 moons)Brazenwind:A dark brown tabby with forst brown wings. ( 34 moons)
Apprentices-
Quietpaw:A mute light gray she-cat,gray wings. (13 moons)
Queens-Sunrose:A golden she-cat with light black wings.
(38 moons)
Elders-
Ripear:A small tabby tom with no ears,Red wings. (89 moons)
EDIT-I will fix the Clans up to show the changes in the chapters
Prologue
A small pool,filled with stars of the sky,but the sky was black.Five cats sat around a such strange pool.What was thought to be a leader,later found to be an elder,stood,his glossy white fur glowly.
"A prophecy has come!"He rasped,his old voice filling the area.A lean and lithe gray tabby she-cat got up,a leader.
"Wiseheart,we all have found out.But thank-you,we all can know now."A hint of annoyence was traced in her voice,as her feather wings fluttered in a small breeze.
"But the clans are weak! Not another tragety!"Yowled a dark gray tom,his black wings stiff.
"Why should it be bad?It might not be Nightheart."Asked another leader, her voice fading.One cat sat on the edge,his eyes staring into the deep star-filled pool.The cat got up,his gray eyes filled of strangeness.The wings of this cat were black,almost as the blank night sky.His words weren't of his own,it was monotone,and the voice echoed.
"There will be one,
With wings of the sky,
Who hold the power,
To change it all."
He wasn't known through the clans,an old elder maybe,but the prophecy was spoken.The cats murmered to eachother about the strange cat,who had spoken of the prochey.The gray tabby she-cat stepped forward.
"It has been spoken."Her voice was loud and clear,every word bounced off the wall of the closed area.The cats one by one was leaving,untill a light golden she-cat was left,crouched over,staring into the starry pool.