Poems about warriors in general

[Snowywhisker]

Here are some poems I came up with over the last few days.

The Hunting Patrol

The tingle of fur
The stillness of the air
How fun it is
To hunt.
The mouse's heart,
Its beating short and fast
pounding in my ear fur,
I pounce.
I thank StarClan for a
Good hunt.

The Gathering

Running in the night
the trees
above, the grass wet
with early dew.
Pelts brush lightly,
the air humming
with excitement.
We are almost there.
The Gathering.

Feathertail’s Sorrow

I forgave
The Tribe for separating my
brother from me.
I fought for the safety of all
my friends, my clans.
I do not regret my decision,
just my leaving of
my love.
Crowfeather.

StarClan

They whisper
strange words, poetic in ways
why don't they tell us straight?
to the cats who bring health
and order, they hear them
stars they sit on and watch
the forest cats
night guardians
StarClan

What do you guys think? ;D

[Reedfoot]

These are GREAT! Especially the last two. Good job!!!

[Snowywhisker]

Thankz. More coming soon! I need inspiration.

[wolfclaw]

Jaypaw's blindness?

[Snowywhisker]

umm, I tried, but...I can't get anything until I read the whole series. Need more on him. Right now he's like a life-hating raincloud!! I can't get anything from that until I learn more. But I did make a poem about that time in the sight, when Hollypaw said. "we fight as one." but since I wrote it for a poetry book(everyone makes their own, mines about warriors), its in my writing folder at school. But I promise, more soon!!

[Snowywhisker]

Feelings of Squirrelflight
Why doesn't he believe me?
I thought he was my friend.
But he trusts Hawkfrost, lucky me
and the truth Hawkfrost bends.
Why is Leafpool so guilty?
She has done nothing wrong.
Her emotions might sweep me off my paws,
if I stay here too long.
I'm glad I have Ashfur,
A loyal and true cat.
And when I need a good friend,
he's always there to chat.
Through Brightheart’s Eyes
That fluffy white fur,
those bright blue eyes.
His welcome is like
a bright sunrise.
I know how to fight.
I know how to hunt.
I'm glad Cloudtail helped me
through my injury slump.
I love him, he loves me
A loyal and headstrong mate.
His golden patience to teach me
was like an opening gate.
Together a kit
we raised, we loved
and even though she's our only one,
She's like a morning dove.
Going to StarClan
"I'm dying."

The stars are brighter
My memories sharper
as my life swirls before me

"You’ve come for me, have you?"

you will call to your beloved
who joined StarClan
without you

"Don't go!"

Your friends around you
will start to fade, their screaming
meows low

"I have come for you."

Stars are what you are now
dotted through your pelt
dreams are when your seen now

"I love you, I'm sorry...goodbye."

your last words.


New ones!!! Anyone like?