Squirrelflight Poems!

[Star]

In My Heart(About Brambleclaw)

My heart pounding
Ba-bump
Ba-bump
I can hardly breathe
I'm tracking him
Why do I hide?
Under the insults and corrections
I want to be next to him
That's why I follow in the shadows
I can't admit it
But I want him
My great sin
Arrogance
You have betrayed me again
Ba-bump
Ba-bump
He can hear my heart
I'm sure
Yet he does not notice me
I'm safe
My love
I shall forever follow you in the dark
Ba-bump
Ba-bump
For you are in my heart


Fear(About Moving to the New Territory)

I've returned to the dark
And after seeing the light
Do I want to live this fear?
Follow follow
Hurry!
Do I want to live this fear?
Heartache
Hearts are for breaking
Do I want to live this fear?
New love
But do we really belong?
And do I want to live this fear?

I'll add more when I think of them! ^^

[Emberfur]

Wow those are awesome did you make those up from the top of your head if you did you have a good talent ^_^ ;D

[Star]

Yeah I did, thanks! I was just sitting at the computer doing nothing when all of a sudden I thought "I wanna write Squirrelflight poems..." and I just made them up as I went along. ^^

[Emberfur]

Oh thats really kewl

[[spotty]]

[glow=red,2,300]wow! Those are really good [/glow]

[Rosekit]

I like both of them a lot!!!! They are excellent!!!
*Rosekit

[Reedfoot]

Nice job! I like the first one more, though they're both good.

[Star]

Yeah, the first one just kinda spilled through my fingers onto the keyboard... ^^

Thank you! ;D

[Snowywhisker]

I LOVE them. They rock! I'm such a sucker for good poetry. You're an artist! ;D ;D
I write warriors poetry too. Here's something:

They whisper
strange words, poetic in ways
why don't they tell us straight?
to the cats who bring health
and order, they hear them
stars they sit on and watch
the forest cats
night guardians
StarClan

What do you think? I'm not sure about it.

[[spotty]]

oo! I like it! The words all sound so nice together

[Snowywhisker]

Thanks. I have more poems, but I'll start it in another thread.