Bluestar poem

[Reedfoot]

I believe this poem came to me in a flash of inspiration during the middle of a boring class a few weeks ago. I just found it again and thought I'd share it with y'all. It's a poem about Bluestar's life from her POV, but it doesn't have a title yet.

Born into Thunder
Trained for fighting
Finally a warrior
named for my blue fur

A bracken-colored River
The love of my life
Must give up my kits
for the good of the Clan

Oh StarClan
did I make the right choice?

For a time I thought I did
I stopped disaster
Saved my Clan
Now the leader, with a red-tailed deputy

I hear of a prophecy
Fire alone can save our Clan
But fire destroys, not saves!
Can StarClan be right?
I must trust them anyway

A kittypet like a brand of fire comes
The Raven says my red-tailed deputy is gone
gone to StarClan
along with my love

Oh StarClan, no!

My new lion-hearted deputy is soon gone as well
Taken down by a shadow
Now my second is a Tiger
ambitious but loyal to the end
(or so I thought)

Rouges attack
I should not have trusted the broken star or Tiger
Betrayal!
If not for Fire I would be with the stars
My mind is snapping
I can trust no one (except Fire)
Tiger is lurking, lurking
Soon he is found leading Shadow

StarClan has abandoned us!

I turn my back on them
I trust no one
not even Fire

Now a new threat - the “pack”
We are slaughtered like prey
The hunters become the hunted
But Fire has saved us, the pack is gone
I have given up my last life
in service of my Clan

My children are with me as I go
and Fire as well
Fire did save our Clan
I know StarClan are not against us
I believe again
And so I join them
My life for my Clan

[K.]

I love it!! Especially the names! *gives cookie*

[[spotty]]

Aww... That's so nice! (I'm not much of a poet)

[Reedfoot]

shadowcloud said:

I love it!! Especially the names! *gives cookie*

Cookie!

Thanks guys! I might try more later, I'm not sure.

[[spotty]]

You should!

[wolfclaw]

That's really good!!! *gives cupcake*

[Reedfoot]

Thankies! I've got a Cinderpelt poem done but it's a lot longer and I still have to type it out. Hopefully I'll post it within a couple days.

[Swimsoul]

Nice!!! It's pretty!!