Snowywhisker's Story...(please help :)

[Snowywhisker]

One bright and cold leaf-bare morning, a broad shouldered brown tabby made his way out of the warriors den, a white cat with mottled brown ear following close behind. "Rippedmoss, do you really have to do this? I mean, Sparkstar will understand-"
"I have to do this Snowywhisker. I'm deputy, what would Sparkstar think if I didn't tell him?"
"Because Icybranch is our friend. She trusts us, Rippedmoss. We can't betray her secret."
"No, she trusts you. She only told me because I'm always at your side. She couldn't get you alone. I don't know how you can be friends with her. She doesn't like you because you aren't clan-born."
"So? She isn't my friend. I keep my enemies closer."
Rippedmoss looked back at Snowywhisker with a sigh. He could never get her to listen to him. He turned around and looked her in the eye. "You know, someone will find out about this."
"Well, then, Sparkstar can hear it from them. Until then, just keep it a secret. She'll never forgive us if we tell Sparkstar that her kits are half-"

"Half what?"
Snowywhisker turned around, startled. Behind her was her newest apprentice, Redpaw. "Half awake all the time. Redpaw, very good! Your getting quieter every day. Maybe one day that quiet padding will pay off with a big pheasant."
The kitten's expression exploded with excitement. Nothing excited Redpaw more than feeding the clan the best he could give. "Now, I asked Ravenwing if he would take you hunting with Branchpaw today. If you find him, tell him I sent you for today and go hunting with them. I want to see the best mouse you can catch, understand?"
The apprentice nodded excitedly, and scampered off towards where Ravenwing and Branchpaw were getting ready to leave. As Redpaw looked to be talking to Ravenwing, he looked at Snowywhisker with the most confused look. She gave him the I'll-take-your-apprentice for-a-day look, and he sighed and walked out of camp, the apprentices chattering excitedly behind him.

[Snowywhisker]

Okay, heres the list of the Clan Characters. You can pretend to be one of them, or be ur own character. Doesn't matter to me.

SnowClan

Leader:Sparkstar (open)
Deputy:Rippedmoss(open)
Medicine Cat:(open, you can make up ur own name for this one.)
Warriors:
Snowywhisker(me, duh)
Foxtail(Redpaw and Branchpaw's Mother, OPEN)
Iceheart(Spotty)
Umiclaw(Jut)
Ravenwing(OPEN)
(open for 5-7 more warriors)
Apprentices
Redpaw(Snowywhisker's apprentice, open)
Branchpaw(Ravenwing's apprentice, open)
Orapaw(Umiclaw's apprentice)
(open for 2 more apprentices)
Queens
Icybranch(open)
(open for 2 or less queens)
Elders
Toadthroat
Grassfur
Hopeheart
Fallenbranch
Jaggedrock

Just post who you would like to be, and start ur part of the story!

[[spotty]]

Could I be a warrior called Iceheart please?

Iceheart padded slowly into the camp carrying a vole. He placed it carefully on the fresh-kill pile. Then he sat down at the edge of the clearing, to wash himself. He watched as Redpaw talked to Ravenwing and Branchpaw. He smiled. He could remember the days when he himself had been an apprentice. He had been so carefree.

[Snowywhisker]

Sure spotty. I'll put you in. THANK YOU for joining my story. Ur the first, as you probably noticed.

[[spotty]]

No problem I love Roleplaying.

BIC: Iceheart licked his silver paw, and drew it over his face. Then he turned to lick his back. A burr clung to his tabby fur. He snatched it between his teeth and pulled. It was holding on tightly. With a huge yank, he pulled it out, along with a few hairs. Iceheart spat out the burr, and went back to washing.

[Snowywhisker]

Rippedmoss looked for someone to take another hunting patrol. As he looked around the clearing, he saw Iceheart washing and knew he wasn't due for any patrols. "Hey Iceheart! Could you take out a hunting patrol? The fresh-kill pile is low." Iceheart looked up at him from his washing. Rippedmoss shivered. Sparkstar should have named him Icestare, he thought. Though the gaze Iceheart held him in was meant to be friendly and warm, his gastly blue eye color defied it, making Rippedmoss look away. "And if your not too busy, could you also lead tomorrow's Dawn Patrol? I'm taking sunhigh, and Foxtail said she could do tonight's moonhigh patrol and tomorrow's."
Iceheart nodded and went off, going to fetch his friends for the hunting patrol. Rippedmoss went back to his thinking. If only I could just figure out what Icybranch is up to, then I could prove to snowywhisker she's dangerous and manipulating her. How come this kind of stuff is never easy? he thought.

[jut4325]

i want to be a cat i made

his name is
umiclaw
he is only 10moons old and is a warrior

as rippedmoss was thinking umiclaw ran in and tackled snowy.
sup
umiclaw asked what have you been up to ?

[Snowywhisker]

Snowywhisker stood up and shook herself. "I was about to go hunting with-"
"Can I come?" Umiclaw asked, staring up at her pleadingly.
"Sure. Rippedmoss is coming too. Hey Rippedmoss!"
Rippedmoss looked over at Snowywhisker, his thoughts making him stare blankly. "Okay, I'm coming." he managed to respond as he cleared his head.

(BTW I'll add you now!)

[jut4325]

yay im so happy

i finnaly get to come on a hunting patrole


*Umiclaw sneaks up on a mouse from the back as the mouse went to run umiclaw pounced on it*

ya i cought it

[Snowywhisker]

hehe

"Nice catch." Rippedmoss complemented. He was staring off into the distance, acutely aware of the rest of the hunting patrol. "Ripppedmoss! Are you still here?" Snowywhisker hissed in his ear kiddingly. He turned toward her and looked into her bright green-blue eyes. "Sorry, I'm lost in my thoughts." He looked off into space. Snowywhisker snorted. "I feel like you've joined StarClan already, your barely talking like you used to. Is something bothering you?" her eyes said it all. She really cared about him, but he was too lost in space to notice. She fidgeted uncomfortably, knowing sometime she would have to tell him how she felt.

[jut4325]

as we were walking home sparkstar called umiclaw
umiclaw took off running. umiclaw!are you ready to have an apprentice sparkstar asked?
yes
ok well now that orakit is now an apprentice i would like you to train him.. ok no problem umiclaw told him

[Snowywhisker]

Snowywhisker purred with delight when she heard the good news. "Umiclaw, we can train together, and tomorrow we can explore the border and-"
"Whoa, one thing at a time!" Umiclaw purred, happiness visible in his bright eyes. "We can show Orakit the borders first. I'll tell you when I'm ready for Orakit to start battle training."
Snowywhisker smiled. "Glad you're taking it slow and easy. It's the best way to do it!" she meowed, and headed off to grab a small thrush off the fresh-kill pile and lay down next to Rippedmoss to share their meal.

[jut4325]

you know
i think you need to lay off on the poppy seeds
lmao

jk
so anyways
you are really hyper
you know do you have an apprentice?

and yes i agree that i will need your help . you know since i was not a warrior long!!

[[spotty]]

Iceheart gathered some cats together. Then they headed out of camp. Iceheart heard their paws thump lightly on the earth behind them. The sound comforted him. He liked Clan life. He could not imagine what it would be like to live the life as a loner. He lifted his head as he caught the scent of mouse. He looked back at the cats behind him. He nodded to Foxtail, who then raced off in search of the mouse. The group padded on.

[jut4325]

umiclaw walked over to the apprentices den and woke up orapaw
orapaw we are going to exlore the borders today and we are going to start fight training. orapaw layed back down his head and went to sleep.umiclaw the cuff of his neck and drug him out of the apprentices den. now wake up now. or feel my wrath. orapaw jumped. y did you do that he hissed. stand up. we are going out of the camp.