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Post by wolfclaw on Apr 29, 2007 19:12:36 GMT -5
From The Sight, page 220... Jaypaw lay on the halfrock...
That "lay" should be "lied", right? I pay attention in English...
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Post by K. on Apr 29, 2007 19:14:52 GMT -5
I thought that too! On some page they call Firestar Firestorm. O__O
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Post by wolfclaw on Apr 29, 2007 19:20:35 GMT -5
XDDDD Firestorm is a cool name though.
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Post by Reedfoot on Apr 29, 2007 20:10:19 GMT -5
No, I think in that context "lay" is actually correct. But, what do I know? *shrugs* I thought that too! On some page they call Firestar Fire storm. O__O OY VEY. *slaps forehead* Quality control is self-destructing. I'D make a better freaking editor than whoever's making all these dumb mistakes!!! (and if it's Vicky...sorry Vicky! I do like you!
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Post by wolfclaw on Apr 30, 2007 16:36:50 GMT -5
Lay is present tense, but it sounded weird since the rest of the story is basically past-tense. It sounded like someone was ordering Jaypaw: Jaypaw! Lay on the halfrock right now! X3
There was another grammatical error and it was with "come" or something...I think it should've been came.
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Post by hastepaw on May 10, 2007 18:36:59 GMT -5
In Moonrise (I think it was Moonrise I forgot) they put SORMfur instead of Stormfur. I burst out laughing! xD
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Post by K. on May 10, 2007 19:28:28 GMT -5
Sormfur???! XDD Isn't that something about Russia...? *knows she's heard of "sorm" before somewhere*....
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Post by wolfclaw on May 12, 2007 12:38:58 GMT -5
Sorm? ? X3
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Post by Snowywhisker on May 12, 2007 16:10:42 GMT -5
Did you guys read the excert from Dark River? They keep calling Mousepaw Mousefur! Its really annoying! Its like "...Oh no! Mousefur's going to fall! Hollypaw thought as she watched stunned as Mousepaw tried to claw his way back up the tree. "Try to come down the way you went up, Mousepaw!" Brackenfur yelled, a note of worry in his meow. "Don't worry, Mousefur, I'm coming!" Cinderpaw called to him and clawed her way up the tree. Just as Mousepaw was about to slip, Cinderpaw grabbed him and pulled Mousefur back up. He's safe, Hollypaw thought.
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Post by Reedfoot on May 12, 2007 20:59:44 GMT -5
Did you guys read the excert from Dark River? They keep calling Mousepaw Mousefur! Its really annoying! Its like "...Oh no! Mousefur's going to fall! Hollypaw thought as she watched stunned as Mousepaw tried to claw his way back up the tree. "Try to come down the way you went up, Mousepaw!" Brackenfur yelled, a note of worry in his meow. "Don't worry, Mousefur, I'm coming!" Cinderpaw called to him and clawed her way up the tree. Just as Mousepaw was about to slip, Cinderpaw grabbed him and pulled Mousefur back up. He's safe, Hollypaw thought. hey, yeah, I noticed that too! I think I actually changed it in my copy. ;D
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Post by Snowywhisker on May 15, 2007 18:11:30 GMT -5
How'd you change it?
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Post by Reedfoot on May 15, 2007 23:59:10 GMT -5
Pencil/pen, my friend. Does wonders. ;D
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Post by wolfclaw on May 16, 2007 16:11:49 GMT -5
XDDD OMG! No kidding!
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Post by jut4325 on May 17, 2007 16:53:01 GMT -5
nice lol i really don't pay attention i just read
i only read at night so i never really pay attention to grammer
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Post by K. on May 17, 2007 18:58:33 GMT -5
nice lol i really don't pay attention i just read i only read at night so i never really pay attention to grammer Well clearly, because you neglected to spell gramm ar correctly. 9_9
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